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Scorefactory: ์Šค์ฝ”์–ดํŒฉํ† ๋ฆฌ - ์•„์ด์—˜์ธ  ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น๊ณผ ๋ผ์ดํŒ…์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ์ค€๋น„

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International tourism has increased significantly in recent years. What problems has this caused? What solutions can be suggested? ์นดํ…Œ๊ณ ๋ฆฌ: Problemโ€“Solution | ์–ธ์–ด: Korean ํ‰๊ฐ€ ์ข…ํ•ฉ ์ ์ˆ˜ 6

๊ณผ์ œ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ–ˆ๊ณ , ๋ฌธ์ œ์™€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์„ ๋ชจ๋‘ ์ œ์‹œํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ „์ฒด์ ์ธ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋„ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜์™€ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ถ€์ •ํ™•์„ฑ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์˜ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์„ฑ ๋ถ€์กฑ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— 6์  ์ˆ˜์ค€์œผ๋กœ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Task Response 6

๋ฌธ์ œ์™€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์„ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ์—ˆ๊ณ , ๊ตํ†ต ํ˜ผ์žก๊ณผ ๋Œ€๊ธฐ ์˜ค์—ผ์ด๋ผ...


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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant. ์นดํ…Œ๊ณ ๋ฆฌ: TASK 1(A) | ์–ธ์–ด: Korean ํ‰๊ฐ€ ์ข…ํ•ฉ ์ ์ˆ˜ 6

๊ณผ์ œ ์š”๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ๋Œ€์ฒด๋กœ ์ถฉ์กฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹ต๋ณ€์ด๋ฉฐ, ์ฃผ์š” ์ถ”์„ธ์™€ ๋น„๊ต๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ๋‹ค๋ค˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜์น˜์˜ ์ •ํ™•์„ฑ, ํ‘œํ˜„์˜ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›€, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์ •ํ™•๋„์—์„œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐœ์„ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์–ด ์ „์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ IELTS 6.0 ์ˆ˜์ค€์œผ๋กœ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Task Response 6

์ฃผ์š” ํŠน์ง•์„ ์ „๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž˜ ์„ ํƒํ–ˆ๊ณ , ๋‹ค์„ฏ ํ™œ๋™์˜ ์ „๋ฐ˜์  ๊ฒฝํ–ฅ์„ ๋น„๊ตํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ๋งˆ์…œ ์•„์ธ ์™€...


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Some people believe that university students should pay tuition fees, while others believe that education should be free for everyone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ์นดํ…Œ๊ณ ๋ฆฌ: Discussion | ์–ธ์–ด: Korean ํ‰๊ฐ€ ์ข…ํ•ฉ ์ ์ˆ˜ 8

์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๋‹ตํ–ˆ๊ณ , ์–‘์ชฝ ๊ฒฌํ•ด์™€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๊ท ํ˜• ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ์ œ์‹œํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ตฌ์กฐ, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ชจ๋‘ ์•ˆ์ •์ ์ด๋ฉฐ IELTS Task 2์—์„œ ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋‹ต์•ˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ๋” ๋†’์€ ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ ์˜๊ฒฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ•...


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In some countries, it is thought that children should learn a second language as soon as they start school. While in other countries, it is believed that children should not be taught a second language until they are teenagers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ์นดํ…Œ๊ณ ๋ฆฌ: Discussion | ์–ธ์–ด: Korean ํ‰๊ฐ€ ์ข…ํ•ฉ ์ ์ˆ˜ 5.5

์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์€ ์ ์ ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‘ ๊ด€...


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In many cities around the world, air pollution is a growing problem. What are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be taken to solve it? Category: Problemโ€“Solution | Language: English Evaluation Overall Score 7

This is a strong Task 2 response that fully answers the question and shows good control of organisation and vocab...


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